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jack was a man who was a police. he knew that a murderer who used vodoo was broken out of jail and killed about a million people and some animals.
jack got out of his police car and went into the station. he said to his boss are there any cases today. his boss said that there was a godam murderer out there and to go away.back in washington at the white house the prtesident george w bush was giving a speech on the smog in la when someone asked about the murderer. the white house polcie were going to arrest the person but gerge w bush said that they were going to catch the murderer. he was even more bad than asama binalden.
the murderer sat in th dark night, waiting...
he wanted to smell blood again and thistime he wanted jacks blood.when jack found out he got realy angry and hit his boss who nerly dide.

ill do part 2 soon do u like it

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It's like nothing I've ever read before. You're on your own level with this. And it can only get better from here.


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Write more.






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That was probably the best thing I've ever read.


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Oh my God.


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all filla, no silla


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he knew that a murderer who used vodoo was broken out of jail and killed about a million people and some animals.


Those foolish police! Someone of that calibur shouldnt be kept in just any jail. They need energy fields that have the battery life of eternity. Just like Xenu. Who's running this operation!?


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jack flew into mekxico to look for the murderer. on the plane he said 'haha if there are snakes on the plane i am getting OFF!' there wasnt but he found a clue in mekxico about the murderer. the clue was alot of blood in the killers house. the blood was nearly all gone so jack was lucky when he did. someone called his cell phone and it was his wife. his wife said she is a hostage to the mad killer and jack needs to kill the murdered or the murderer will kill jacks wife.crazy!) jack called the fbi who sent all of their best people to the murderes real house. jack was about to go in when the building blue up!!!


part iii coming soon pls comment

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did you write Snakes on a plane?


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when the house cort on fire jack was ok becase he was behind the wall! his wife was definteely dead and he said NOOOOOOOOOO
he new cpr and did it and she was fine. the bad guy cam in and sed that he worked for gorge bush. jack said 'bullSHIit' and shot the guy in the legs.
gorge bush was happy becuase he gave jack a medel.but just when he gave him the medel the bad guy broke out of jale! looks like jack is going to have to go to work aGAIN

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i liked the plot twist, what a great end to the story.

I wonder what will happen in jacks next adventure, and what the title of the story will be called.


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Fullerman wrote:
jack needs to kill the murdered


I hope you know that you just said Jack needs to kill people that are already dead.


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It's poetic. This is my favourite thing of all time.


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Fullemran is a great writer.

Hey Fullerman... you should write a story about this jack guy and like he discovers that the US isnt even real.


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